Careless book geek

I have so many problems with this novella and I don't even know why. Maybe it's because I feel like I've read better fanfiction erotica than this. Writing was sloppy, I had a problem getting into a story, I felt as though Chris's character wasn't as nearly developed as he could be and whole thing was too rushed, even though it was just a small novella. Maybe it's just me and me not getting used to short stories. So I do hope other people will enjoy it better than me.